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　　上周常州环球教育Sean给烤鸭们简要的分析和点评C12 四套试题中的写作部分，并承诺后期会给大家对每一套试题(test5-8)做更加详细的解析。这不，今天就是兑现的时刻啦!

　　Test5 详解

　　I 改写题干(略)

　　II 客观描述：

　　1 描述male和female 各自百分比随年纪变化的趋势

　　As can be seen from the chart, the percentage of males who exercised regularly declined rapidly from 52.8% to 39.5% as their age grew from 15 to 44, and then the number rose again to 46.7% gradually with the aging process.

　　In contrast, the proportion of females increased slowly from 47.7% to 53.3% with the growing of their ages before 54 years old, followed by a rapid decrease to 47.1% when they entered the aged group.

　　2 组内比较：按百分比差距分类描述

　　For the people who are aged 15 to 24, 58.2% of women did regular exercise, compared with 47% of males in this group.

　　However, in the four groups of people aged from 25 to 54, all the percentages of females were higher than those of males.

　　As regard to the above-65-year-olds, similar percentage of men and women (around 47%) were physically active people.

　　III 总结:

　　总体比较：male大于female的组(young people)，和female大于male的组(middle-aged, the senior)

　　Overall, young males were more likely to lead an active lifestyle than young females, while the middle-aged and senior females had more enthusiasm in physical activity than their male counterparts.

　　(标注颜色出为“同意替换”表达)

　　文章总体结构

　　I.开头：　背景-转述-自己观点

　　II.一方观点：　分享信息：互利互惠(mutual benefit)，促进发展(advance development)

　　III.另一方观点：　不分享信息：重要信息的安全(information security)个人隐私权利(privacy protection), 知识产权(intellectual property)

　　IV.自己观点：　折中观点，分类讨论：

　　公共信息共享，重要信息加强监督，个人信息实施保护

　　自己观点段例文

　　For my part, after considering the arguments above, I think different kinds of information should be dealt with separately. For the public information, such as the current news, weather report and encyclopedic knowledge, it is necessary and beneficial to release them to the public who have the right to know. But some important information, which may involve state security or the results of scientific researches, should be strictly-monitored and highly-protected. As to the citizens’ personal information, stringent legal action must be taken to combat any violation.

　　译文

　　就我个人而言，在考虑了以上两个观点之后，我认为不同种类的信息应被区别对待。对于像时事新闻，天气预报和百科知识一类的公共信息，把它们发布给理应享有知情权的公众是必要而且对他们有帮助的。但是，一些可能涉及安全和科研成果的重要信息则应被严格监督和高度保护。对于公民个人信息而言，任何侵犯行为都应以法律手段严厉打击。

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