审题！开八倍镜！

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4.7刚刚过去了一场雅思考试，

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Some people think the most important thing about being rich is that it gives them the opportunity to help other people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

这场考试的题目是雅思大作文中非常经典的题目，即带有词的题目，这种类型的考题，对于考生的审题分析能力提出了较高的要求，许多同学会在这类题目上栽跟头。

审题

AD(观点)类，注意题中有词：the most important

一般考题中出现的词有：，(only)，完全否定(never, little, few...)

这类题目的个难点是确定文章的主题, Which one is the topic?

A. being rich gives them the opportunity to help other people

B. the most important thing about being rich

正确是B

很多同学会去写富人要不要帮助穷人，这种思路都是偏题的

安排结构，列提纲

I.开头段：背景+转述+自己观点(disagree)

II.立论1段：being rich to improve oneself: receive education, travel

III.立论2段：being rich to protect the environment/ wild animals

IV.驳论段：being rich to help people in need: donate to the charity

驳：not the most important, responsibility of the government

V.结尾段

驳论段分析

驳论段也是一个难点，很多学生包括一些老师对驳论段的写法都没有清晰的认识。

首先，提出反方论点

然后，给出一定的论据

在写反方论点、论据过程中要进行逻辑的弱化

最后，反驳之前提出的反方论点

例文

反方论点：Admittedly, some wealthy people can make some efforts to help those in need, like donating to the charity.

论据：As we are living in an interdependent community, mutual assistance may seem to be necessary for each member to live a better life. And helping others may create a fulfillment of being needed. In this case, the gap between the haves and have-nots may be narrowed, which is beneficial to the social harmony.

反驳：However, it is not the most important thing of being rich and poverty alleviation should be the responsibility of the government.

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