雅思考情速递——写作篇
常州环球雅思英语培训中心
发表于:2018-10-12 15:48:1010.11雅思考情速递
写作Task 2
Some groups, such as poor people or people from rural areas find it is difficult to access the university education. University should make it especially easy for the students come from the rural areas get an access to the university.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
审题:大学应不应该给贫困地区的学生录取优惠政策?
确定观点:进行双方论点头脑风暴Brainstorming......
应该 | 不应该 |
1.(社会方面):有利于贫困,农村地区的经济发展 | 1.(学生个人方面):学业,同学竞争的压力 2.(社会方面):不利于社会和科学持续发展
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“不应该”一方我们能想出两个分论,“应该”一方只有一个,因此我们的观点选择是“不应该”。
(有其它双方不同论点的同学可以写留言回复进行讨论)
文章结构提纲
I.开头段(背景引入+转述话题+自己的观点)
II.立论1段:peer pressure, academic challenge
III.立论2段:depress social and scientific development
IV.驳论段:boost the economy in rural and underdeveloped areas
V.结尾:重申观点,概括驳论
立论段例文:立论1段
To begin with, students from rural areas will suffer form huge peer pressure and academic challenge after they are admitted by universities who give them easier access to higher education. Universities, especially those of international reputation, are full of talented students in every field, and academic achievement is a crucial evaluation criteria of a student. So, a mediocre student from rural regions will find it hard to compete with their outstanding classmates with better education background in urban areas, and some of them may even have difficulty to graduate. For example, in China, some high school students form underdeveloped provinces can get “bonus scores” in the College Entrance Examinations. Unfortunately, most of these “unqualified students” have to drop out university because their poor academic performance.
驳论段例文
Admittedly, affording students in poor areas easier access to university may help develop the local economy, as some of these students who are benefited from this policy may be willing to devote themselves to the development of their underdeveloped hometowns. Thus, the gap between rural and urban areas may be narrowed to some extent. However, the advantage of this policy is quite limited, since most of the university graduates will choose to stay in big cities for a more promising career development.
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