G类投诉信的常见思路
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发表于:2013-06-28 14:56:27投诉信一直是移民类小作文常考的话题,根据笔者多年的教学,发现投诉信一般可以从以下四个思路去发展。
一、投诉理由1:服务不周
投诉信中投诉服务是经常会考到的话题,一般主要集中在对于饭店,宾馆,餐厅,旅行社等服务性行业的投诉,此类书信一般在结构上可分为以下几个部分:
- 自我介绍,表明投诉内容以及与收信人的相关性。
- 陈述投诉内容,如时间、地点、人物、事件等,并指出对方服务问题所在以及由此而产生的对自己或者家人的影响。
- 提出整改建议或者希望得到对方的赔偿或补偿。
让我们结合来分析一下:
You just returned from a tour. However, you were dissatisfied with the service you received from the travel agency. Write a letter to the manager of the agency. In your letter,
- give the details of your tour
- explain why you were unhappy with the service
- say what you want the company do for you
题目并无指明具体投诉内容,因此考生选择余地较大,一般来说,朗阁海外考试研究中心建议考生可以考虑旅行社安排的住所不好,比如房间脏等。具体写法如下:
The room was not cleaned on a daily basis and that my bed was made up only every three days.
还可以说房间没有热水,比如:
The hot water was only supplied from 6:00 am to 10:00 pm, which means if I arrived back at the hotel late, it was impossible for me to take a shower with hot water.
此外,还可以围绕吃饭问题进行投诉,如:
The food in the restaurant was disappointing. Not only was it extremely overpriced, but the quality was very poor.
上述所提到的关于服务质量的投诉,大家不难发现里面说的房间,热水,吃饭问题其实换一个服务性行业的考题我们也可以套用。因此我们要熟记这些基本的投诉点。 文中图片素材来源网络,如有侵权请联系删除
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