15-16年BEC初级写作复习讲义9
第二讲 商务英语写作的文体风格
(一)商务书信的文体风格
一封好的商业书信应该体现出语言自然精练、行文流畅、可读性高的文体风格。
商业书信的写作必须力求“自然”，不能满篇都是过时的商业行话。例子：
使用过时商业行话的句子 自然的句子
Incompliance
with the afore
-mentioned
agreement, dispatch of goods will be
undertaken
subsequent
to receipt of
said monies
. .
As agreed, we shall forward the
goods to you when we have
received your cheque
We should be obliged if you
could contact our Mrs Xiao at an
early date. . Please contact Mrs Xiao
soon.
We beg to inform you that we are
herewith canceling our order for
the same. . I am afraid we are
canceling our order for the
above goods.
Assuring you of our best attention at
all times, and awaiting the favour of
your early response. . I look forward to hearing
from you soon.
8 Due to the fact that your contract has
lapsed, we are unable to comply with
your request. . As your contract contract has lapsed
we cannot do as you request.
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