下面我们就来介绍让步段如何写作。典型的写作方式是”三步走”原则: 立反(承认反方观点的合理性)+论反(给出反方论据)+驳反(反驳反方观点)。
下文结合实例,我们来分析如何写出一个具有说服力的让步段。
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“三步走”原则:
让步=立反+论反+驳反
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常用词汇句式:
立反
1. as is granted, ...
2. opponents would argue that...
3. although/ in spite of the fact that ..., people tend to believe that ...
4. it is undeniable that ...
for example/ instance,...
this is because ...
驳反
however,...
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案例分析
example 1:
some people think that it is more important to plant more trees in open areas such as towns and cities than build more housing. to what extent do agree or disagree?
让步段: (全文的立场: 种树比建房好)
立反:in spite of the importance of planting trees in towns and cities, the construction of houses might be more significant in some cases.
论反:this is because in certain regions where housing shortage is rather severe, the priority of governments would be building houses rather than planting trees.
驳反:however, this kind of shortage has already been alleviated in numerous areas, so planting trees deserves more consideration.
通过上面这道题让步段的写作,大家不难看出,“立反”和“论反”这两句的写作其实比较好找到突破口,关键是“驳反”这一句比较难寻切入点,这也被很多同学经常抱怨: 前一步刚给出理由来支持一个观点,后一步就要推倒这个观点,难道是要我“人格分裂”吗?没错,是的!为了解决这个疑惑,以下就为大家介绍两种“人格分裂”即“驳反”的方法。
“驳反”法一:解决问题--说明问题能被克服,好简单提出解决方法
example 2:
in many countries, traditional foods are replacedby international fast foods. this is having a negative effect on families and societies. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
让步段:(全文的立场:快餐食品对人们有利)
立反:in spite of the two advantages mentioned above, there is an evident disadvantage of fast food.
论反: the individuals who consume fast food constantly tend to become overweight, getting a number of diseases.
驳反: however, this risk could be avoided to a large extent if people have fast food properly and do exercise regularly. (解决问题)
“驳反”法二:针锋相对--直接指出反方的缺陷
example 3:
some people believe that living in big cities is bad for health.
do you agree or disagree?
让步段:(全文的立场:住在城市对健康有害)
立反: although living in urban areas is detrimental to individuals’ physical and mental health, there are also benefits of urban life.
论反: for instance, people might benefit from the better health care service provided in metropolises.
驳反: however, this service may never completely cope with the health problems of citizens living in big cities. (针锋相对)
结语
以上就是对于让步段的概念、意义的介绍,以及“三步走”原则的写法分析。让步段对于增强论证的说服力和扩充文章内容,有着重要意义。同学们在论证中正确使用此法,同时也希望该方法能切实帮助大家提高雅思写作水平,实现高能。
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